Wake Up Call Oct30 by Mark McKay on October 30, 2017 at 12:00 am Chapter: Chapter 6 - Shuffle I’m moving this weekend. It’s been crazy all this month, but it should all be over soon.
I hope you got good moving weather, and really enjoy your new place, Mark!
I think the officer enjoyed that. Do you think he enjoyed slapping Peter? Maybe just a little tooo much?? 🙂
Panel 6: There should be a comma at the end of “through”.
Panel 7: There should be a space between “your” and “construction”.
Why should there be a comma after “through”? I would not have thought so. Can you please point me to a reference?
(I am asking seriously. I try to write, and want to get it right! 🙂 )
It’s really more that the word “too”, unless in quotes like here, should always be preceded by a comma.
Can you please point me to a reference? I don’t see it mentioned either way in my Strunk & White’s.
There’s this quote from Final Fantasy IX: “I, too, will welcome you with open arms.”