Landslide
Dec07
on December 7, 2015
at 12:00 am
For timeline purposes, this and the previous page should probably be moved back to just before the mystical goat woman showed up. Not that the story is unworkable like this, but it would flow better that way. Such are the perils of improvised story telling!
I particularly like the first and third panels.
The woman in panel one is generally nice to look at and her expression is quite good. Her expression is well done in panel two also, but I think her proportions look better in panel one.
I like panel three for it’s unusual perspective, nicely handled and April’s believeability. I am amused that the column of smaller rocks “up” the center of the panel resemble a spine. 🙂